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sábado, 23 de noviembre de 2013

An essay of "The Door In The Wall"


H.G WELLS.
In the door in the wall by H.G Wells a man called Wallace founds a door full of fantastic and magic things, Wallace has a friend the one who was always with him. The author shows who can the reality and the imagination can be confusing someone.
Throught the book, Wallace is always wanting to found that door the one he enters when he was a little boy. Reality and imagination is always present here. This door was not really true, because Wallace when he found it, the door was in different places for his this "door in the wall" represents his oun chilhood.
Wallace want his friend to believe and trust him, bou his friend did not know if that door that wallace talks a lot and love too much was real because he never saw it. That's way reality vs imagination is the important thing in this story, he was alone in his life all he had was a friend because his father did not pay attention To him and his mother died when he was a little boy.
At the end of the story Wallace died, we have to know that he was alone in his life . It was a sad and alone man with a sad life. He think that the door exist but it was not true.

In the door in the wall reality vs imagination is giving an exampke of what Wallace thinks or what it was completly real. Reading this story it makes me realize that all of us have yo protect and to remember in a good way and with good felling our chilhood for me being a kid is one of the most important stage in our lives. I loke this story to much because it is very interesting and very atracting in the moment of reading it. In this theme is good explained because this door that Wallace was imagining or in a way looking, appears always in different places that's way we could realize tthat the theme is reality vs imagination. So to finish this story is sad but at the same time is problematic and preocupated. We have to valorate all what we have and to love all, sometimes we did not have all what we want but we have to love all what we have. I like this story and it is to sad and imaginary.

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domingo, 27 de octubre de 2013

Money isn`t all in the world.

MONEY IS NOT EVERYTHING
It was a sunny day. Tom`s father was called Randolpg and his mother was called Sussie, There were having a kind of conversation in a saturdar. Tom was 18 years old and catherine 10.
In the middle of the conversation Tom (the son) started having a kind of fight whit his mother about the social classes. Tom wanted to be in the most important class, the one tant richo people could be, his mother started shouting saying that thay wouldn`t be more than other people if they were part of the lower classes.
Tom started looking for this bags and started putting all his clothes inside. Tom arribed at the kitchen were Sussie was and he said: "I`m tired of being only one more in the world". Sussie angry, and sad said: "Please , Tom stay here I love you son, please don`t leave". Tom crying , threw away his bag and run to his room.
The night was arraiving an Tom was still crying. His mother knocked on the door and she entered to tom`s room, were they talk for two hours.

Randolph, still angry knocked on the door and entered the room, thay told Tom that money, was not all in the world, there were more important things than money, being rich would not make you happy and that he had to accept the social class they were being part of.
Days after, Tom understood that not only having money would make him happy, that he should enjoy life enjoy every minute of his life, and that having a family and friends that love you was the most important thing in the world. That saturday afternoon Tom undestood lots of things.
People learn a little bit every day, thay learned new and fantastic things day by day, so they went to sleep and started crying again.
20 days had pased, thay started not having money, they only had money to buy food, Things were getting more difficult than ever, their kids couldn`t go to school because Sussie and Randolph didn`t have enought money to pay for the,. Tom was repeating the same ideas of being rich as well as Catherine.
One night Randolph and Sussie said yo Catherine and Tom that thay had to talk with them.
The four of them relaxed in the sofa and thay started telling their kids all the problems that they were having. Tom and Catherine whan thay realised that thing were getting worse, they picked up all their things and they immediately went to their grandsmother`s house, in the street they found a dog and a cat.
Catherine told Tom that she wants to adopted them and that her dream was to had a pet, so Tom took the dog and the cat and they called them sweetym, to the beautiful and big dog, and jerry to the ugly but funny cat.
They thought that going to their rich grandomother`s house would be a better idea instead of being in their own house.
SWEETY

JERRY.









Money would not make you happy, with this you could buy all but NEVER love and HAPPINES-

sábado, 13 de julio de 2013

Soliloquy.

Well in the class of L/L Writing we start talking about soliloquy, Apart of the poem "PIED BEAUTY" of GERARD MANLEY HOPKINS. Pied Beauty talk about that we should glorify God for all the pied or dappled things, he has given us on earth. Al these beautiful pied things were created by God. This is a God that never changes and whose beauty will never dissapear. He mentions that what we should do as a way of thinking him = "PRAISE HIM".


Oh!! This is beautiful, It is a lovely place ful of people they are ver kind. Everything that happens they help us. Here there are plenty of birds with lots of colours. They sing all the time. Ohhhh!! wait I can include that in my poem, It is a good idea.The I will interview some people and I will ask them about how they lived here. I am very interes about what they are going to tell me.
Ohh what rainbow full of colours the name is.... is..... ohh!! Dappled Things!!!!.
Well It is night I think I have to sleep so that tomorrow I can wake up and make the inverv.....
WAIT WAIT. that is the famous place, the one that all people go to have dinner. I will enter to see all and take some pictures.
Well I am very happy taht I could come here to this English countryside. Here people are very religeous and I love that, because I think that God is "Father". I know a lot of places that I wished to know. I love flowers, animals, nature, houses, God and people here.
It is a lovely country Ohh!!!! this shinning and wonderful sun the one that is lighting all the city.
Ohh!!!! this is too beautiful, I will come here again. I could take lots of ideas to create my beautiful poem, I think people will like it a lot.


Gerard Manley Hopkins

jueves, 23 de mayo de 2013

Diary Entry!

Well , in class we had read a poem called "A Different Hisotry" by SUJATA BHATT.
This poem talk about the life in india before th british colonization, they introduce the imporance of otrees and books, and how you have to trate them. So when we finish to read and discose this poem we decide to writte a diary entry from the point of viwe of Sujata Bhatt when she was a young girl.

Monday 6th May 1940
Dear Diary:
Today was a sad and horrible day, Colonization in India was getting worse, people were not interested about our country, They did`t want to do anything. I am so bad, and serious to see how the british took language , Ideas, Knowledges and identities. In the future I would like to organizse this country, I would like to shout the world that we can make all this better and with any problem, we are good people, all of us want the best for our country.
We want to have a better country, I want to have better security. If I were oldest, I would change a lot of things.  We want to go out from out houses without being scared. We want to let young people have liberty without being sacred.
Here in India life is completely free, Religion and Knowledge are very important to the Indian Culture.
When I get older I want to make different groups of people and all of us will give ideas of how the Indian Country could be more beautiful and safer.
Some people accept this idea but others didn`t people in India sometimes are generous, symphathetic and polite but sometimes they getandry  with the goverment of India and they start making a kind of strike in the centre of the country.
To summeriza this I would say that our country will be better step by step, slowly we will get a special country. Our inhabitants will help us to make this better and to resolve all problems we have.
Ok, To finish I would say we are going to have a better country with better people and better security.
Dear Diary tomorrow I would tell you if the is some change

                                    With Love
                                     Sujata Bhathh.

martes, 6 de noviembre de 2012

The Bad Luck

When the god appear quickly he said that a tsunami will came and took him, this happen only in 5 seconds. It was something unexpected, and took a lot of more people too. The place was a dark. It was a mess. the houses were a total disaster

jueves, 11 de octubre de 2012

Myth

The god appear quickly and said that a tsunami came and took him, this happen only in 5 seconds. It was something unexpected, and it took a lot of more people too. The place was dark, it was a mess, the houses were all wet and cars too, there was a totally disaster.

MY GROUP IS: VICTORIA MARTIN
                        MARTINA PILARCHE
                        DELFINA TESTURI
                        TOMAS MACEIRAS.

lunes, 27 de agosto de 2012

Moral


The Black Car.


They were so happy that they invite Perry to take a walk. Perry like the idea so they start walking across the street. At seven o’clock they saw a black car, however they didn’t pay attention. They keep on walking, but ten minutes later they saw again the same car, so they get scared and start running through Perry’s house. The car started to chase them, but they couldn’t run so far. Suddenly, they saw that the car disappear so they hide in a tree.
Micaela Causarano (85 words)

Moral: In any suspicious situation, ask an adult for help.

martes, 15 de mayo de 2012

Informal Letter


Dr. Jeckyll:

Dear friend i want to see you! I am in the united states, i want you to come here! Do yo remember that you told me that you were going to come here to my house? Please come here to the United States! We are going to have a lot of fun, and we are going to the parks that are beautiful. I am writting this to you because i miss you a lot.

I am living in my house. I am with some more friends called Lisie and Shake. they are so funny. Yesterday i went to two parks, They are wonderful and i went to magic kingodom, and to the other park called animal kingom, i want to go with you to the park that is called Universal It is beautiful, the weather is perfect. It was 40 degrees, If you come, we will have a lot of fun .

I want you to come, please if you can give a kiss to your friends and family. I send you a lot of kisses. I will bring a present to you. I will be waiting for you. I wait for your letter i wish you came. My friends Lisie and Shake send you a lot of kisses to you.
                                                                        BYE KISSES
Mr. Hyde

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